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QMetrology from QCosmology: Study with Entangled Two Qubit Open Quantum System in De Sitter Space
by Sayantan Choudhury, Satyaki Chowdhury, Nitin Gupta, Abinash Swain
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Submission summary
As Contributors:  Sayantan Choudhury 
Arxiv Link:  https://arxiv.org/abs/2005.13555v3 (pdf) 
Date submitted:  20210129 12:25 
Submitted by:  Choudhury, Sayantan 
Submitted to:  SciPost Physics Core 
Academic field:  Physics 
Specialties: 

Approaches:  Theoretical, Phenomenological 
Abstract
In this paper, our prime objective is to apply the techniques of {\it parameter estimation theory} and the concept of {\it Quantum Metrology} in the form of {\it Fisher Information} to investigate the role of certain physical quantities in the open quantum dynamics of a two entangled qubit system under the Markovian approximation. There exist various physical parameters which characterize such system, but can not be treated as any quantum mechanical observable. It becomes imperative to do a detailed parameter estimation analysis to determine the physically consistent parameter space of such quantities. We apply both Classical Fisher Information (CFI) and Quantum Fisher Information (QFI) to correctly estimate these parameters, which play significant role to describe the outofequilibrium and the long range quantum entanglement phenomena of open quantum system. {\it Quantum Metrology}, compared to {\it classical parameter estimation theory}, plays a twofold superior role, improving the precision and accuracy of parameter estimation. Additionally, in this paper, we present a new avenue in terms of {\it Quantum Metrology}, which beats the classical parameter estimation. We also present an interesting result of \textit{revival of outofequilibrium feature at the late time scales, arising due to the longrange quantum entanglement at early time scale and provide a physical interpretation for the same in terms of Bell's Inequality Violation in early time scale giving rise to nonlocality.
Current status:
Author comments upon resubmission
Here we are submitting the updated version of the draft by following both of the referees valuable suggestions. We are thankful to the referees for giving us extremely significant inputs/comments, which helped us to improve the presentation of the revised version of the manuscript. We are thankful to the Editor for communicating with us many times and helped us to resolve various technical issues regarding submission. We believe that the revised version have considerably addressed the crucial issues as asked by the referees. In this regard, we request the Editor to consider this version for the publication in the prestigious journal SciPost.
Best regards,
Dr. Sayantan Choudhury and the team.
List of changes
The list of changes in the revised version are already pointed in the response to the referee report 1 and 2.
Submission & Refereeing History
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Anonymous Report 3 on 2021228 (Invited Report)
Report
Dear Editor,
Authors have answered some of the questions raised by me. It can be accepted for publication.
Author: Sayantan Choudhury on 20210316
(in reply to Report 3 on 20210228)Please look into the attached file where response is written.
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Anonymous Report 2 on 2021223 (Contributed Report)
 Cite as: Anonymous, Report on arXiv:2005.13555v3, delivered 20210223, doi: 10.21468/SciPost.Report.2601
Report
The authors have improved a lot on the formatting which makes me satisfied now. However I still need more explanations about the following major parts before this paper going any further:
1. Why is the studied object important? As I also mentioned in the last round of review, dS space does not bring anything noteworthy and therefore the authors must underscore why should we care about this particular problem: does it bring new understanding of quantum metrology (like breaking the nogo theorem of quantum metrology with dephasing, see [1] below), or this particular space is commonly encountered?
2. For such a simplified system, the author should discuss about what is the best way to fully use the Fisher information in order to estimate the phase. For large scale system this remains an open question, but for 2qubit system this should be derived and included in the text.
Also, as pointed out by other referees, I recommend the authors to clearly distinguish introduction & review with the original works derived in this paper. Current form of this manuscript is still ambiguous to me.
Author: Sayantan Choudhury on 20210316
(in reply to Report 2 on 20210223)Please look into the attached .pdf file where the response to the referee's comments are attached.
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Anonymous Report 1 on 202123 (Contributed Report)
 Cite as: Anonymous, Report on arXiv:2005.13555v3, delivered 20210203, doi: 10.21468/SciPost.Report.2502
Weaknesses
1. The analysis appears to be erroneous.
2. It is not clear why the problem studied here is significant.
3. Very similar studies have appeared in the past.
4. Relevant past works and similar studies have not been cited.
5. The paper does not always clearly distinguish what has been done by others and what is the original contribution of the authors.
6. Presentation lacks clarity.
Report
This paper studies Fisher Information for a particular system: a pair of qubits coupled to a scalar field which acts as a thermal bath. The body of the paper starts with a section on the 'two qubit open system' which (though it was not clearly stated) is a review of previous work. At the end of this section, schematic formulae for the density matrices of the two qubits are given and it is stated that the detailed expressions have been calculated in a different paper (coauthored by some of the authors) in the approximation $2 \pi k \omega >> 1$ and subject to the constraint $\coth (\pi k \omega_0)=0$ where $k, \omega,\omega_0$ are all parameters that enter the density matrices of the qubits. It is stated that the results of this other paper ( not explicitly given here) will be used in obtaining Fisher information.
The original contribution of the paper begins from the section titled 'Estimation of Parameters' and essentially consists of using the density matrices mentioned above to calculate classical and quantum Fisher Information for this system. Variation of CFI and QFI with the different parameters that enter the density matrices is studied.
Now let us elaborate on the issues with the paper:
1. The analysis appears to be erroneous. As per the statement made in the paper, the results for density matrices were obtained in the para regime $k\omega \gg 1 $ subject to the constraint $\coth \pi k \omega_0 =0$. Now there is no real solution to the constraint, the only solution is $k \omega_0 = (n+1) i/2 $ for integer $n$. $\omega_0$ being real, this means $k$ must be purely imaginary. Then it is unclear how $k \omega \gg 1 $ can be fulfilled, since $\omega$ is real again. In any case, in the section on Fisher Information only real values of all the parameters have been considered and further only small values $k\omega$ have been considered. So it appears that neither of the two conditions, under which the paper claims to have derived the expressions for density matrices, were satisfied when the same density matrices were used for the calculation of Fisher Information.
2. It is not clear why the problem studied here is significant: Even if the above issues did not exist, the study here would still need to establish significance. It has not been established why the qubit system is of physical interest, or why metrological considerations are appropriate for this system, or if the calculation of QFI tells us anything nontrivial. There have been interesting applications of Fisher Information in a de Sitter background (for instance, to ask if there are fundamental limitations to measuring cosmological observables of interest), but in this case the study of QFI appears to be arbitrary.
3. Similar studies have appeared in past: Quantum Fisher information for an UnruhDeWitt detector coupled to a scalar field in a dS background was obtained in arXiv 1806.08922, QFI for a qubit coupled to a scalar field in a dS background was obtained in 'Protecting quantum Fisher information in curved spacetime' by Zhiming Huang (EPJP, 2018). Even if significance could be established for this direction of research, the paper would have to be establish how this study is telling us something significantly different from these previous ones.
4. Relevant past works and similar studies have not been cited: the two papers mentioned above which also studied QFI in a very similar context have not been cited. The model of the two qubit system in de Sitter used here first appeared in arXiv 1310.7650 and the formulae given in this paper appear to closely follow the results presented there. While this paper has been cited in previous papers by some of the same authors, it was not cited here. Some other relevant references which studied Fisher information or the dynamics of similar systems in de Sitter space but have not cited: 1812.02345, 1707.09702, 1407.4930, 1605.07350, 1706.0917, 1707.08414.
5. The paper does not always clearly distinguish what has been done previously by others and what is the original contribution of the authors: The authors did not mention where the qubit model used here originated. The fact that it had already been studied in de Sitter space (first in 1310.7650) should have been mentioned. These omissions, together with the authors' referring to the qubit model as 'our model', can be misleading for the reader. More generally, there is no discussion in the introduction about any previous work on open systems in dS (even though some of this research is cited), which can again give an incorrect impression about the originality of the paper.
6. Presentation lacks clarity: Previous results that have been used as the main input in the study of this paper were not presented explicitly nor was a detailed reference given (see point 1 above). Quantities were not defined where they were introduced (for instance, $L$ and $\omega_0$ first appear in eqns 10 and 11 and are not defined till two pages later). There were a number of things that were not clearly explained (such as the distinction between $\omega$ and $\omega_0$, both of which are defined as 'Fourier modes of the Wightman functions' in the paper). Lack of paragraph breaks hampered readability (the whole first column of the second page is a single block of text).
Author: Sayantan Choudhury on 20210316
(in reply to Report 1 on 20210203)We have attached the response to the referee report as .pdf file. Please look into this.
Anonymous on 20210301
I'm the referee of "Anonymous Report 2 on 2021223 Contributed Report", and the [1] reference in my report is Nature Physics 7, 406–411(2011), by B. M. Escher, R. L. de Matos Filho & L. Davidovich.
Anonymous on 20210202
I noticed the following statement in the text which appears to be inaccurate:
"Scientists have used qubits oriented along zaxis as the primary objects when they talk about entanglement. Every student once in his student life has asked himself ‘why do we study the qubits directed along zaxis mainly?’ since literature lacks the study of entanglement where atoms are oriented in direction other than zaxis."
It seems to be saying that the zaxis is given a special treatment, or there is some loss of generality involved in taking a pair of spins along zaxis. Which, because of isotropy, is not true. Perhaps the authors meant something else, in which case I would suggest reframing the sentence.
Anonymous on 20210202
(in reply to Anonymous Comment on 20210202)The authors appreciates the person for this useful comment. We will be careful to reframe the sentence in the future version of the paper.
Anonymous on 20210203
This is an erratum by the referee of report 1. We mistakenly wrote in point (1) that $\coth k\omega_0 = 0$ implies $k \omega_0 =\infty$ when actually, there is no real value of the arguments for which that equation is satisfied. This is an even stronger objection to the results here, which are claimed to have been derived assuming $\coth k\omega_0 = 0$ for real parameters $k,\omega_0$. It shows that there is no parameter range for which the approximation used is valid.