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Dissipative cooling induced by pulse perturbations

by Andrea Nava, Michele Fabrizio

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Preprint Link: https://arxiv.org/abs/2105.01321v2  (pdf)
Date submitted: 2021-08-13 08:56
Submitted by: Nava, Andrea
Submitted to: SciPost Physics
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Abstract

We investigate the dynamics brought on by an impulse perturbation in two infinite-range quantum Ising models coupled to each other and to a dissipative bath. We show that, if dissipation is faster the higher the excitation energy, the pulse perturbation cools down the low-energy sector of the system, at the expense of the high-energy one, eventually stabilising a transient symmetry-broken state at temperatures higher than the equilibrium critical one. Such non-thermal quasi-steady state may survive for quite a long time after the pulse, if the latter is properly tailored.

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Dear Editor-in-charge,

We have considered the Referee reports concerning our manuscript, “Dissipative cooling induced by pulse perturbations”, submitted for publication to SciPost.

We thank the Referees for their constructive remarks, which we address by pertinently updating the revised version of our manuscript, as we detail in the following. Below, we also provide a concise answer to all the Referees' remarks, as well as a list of the major changes we performed to our paper.

We believe that, after the improvements we have made to our manuscript in addressing the Referees' remarks, our paper now meets the requirements to warrant publication in SciPost and resubmit it accordingly.

We thank you for your kind attention in our submission.

Best Regards

Andrea Nava (on behalf of all the authors)

Answers to: Anonymous Report 1 on 2021-7-2 (Invited Report)

We thank the Referee for her/his kind appreciation of our work.

[Q1] The idea to use driven-dissipative dynamics to cool strongly interacting many-body systems has also been investigated recently in the context of reservoir engineering techniques (e.g., [New J. Phys. 15, 073027; Science Adv. 6, eaaw9268; Phys. Rev. Research 2, 023214]). The authors should discuss how their approach is related these works.

[A1] We thank the Referee for pointing to our attention those references that provide very interesting contributions to thermalization and cooling of open quantum systems. We now cite them as Refs. [35-37] in the concluding section of our manuscript. Specifically:

[Page 14] “We finally mention recent works [35-37] that show how properly designed dissipative protocols can efficiently prepare a quantum system in its ground state. Therefore, tailoring dissipation may represent a novel tool to control open many-body systems, including the selective cooling that we have here discussed.”

[Q2] What is the total area of the pulse in the parameterization chosen by the authors? Is it possible for the energy to flow back to the system 1 or do the authors consider the equivalent of a \pi pulse between the two systems?

[A2] The laser pulse has a high oscillatory behaviour (see Eq.[18]), with envelope given by Eq.[19] and period T=2π/ω much lower of the envelope decay time τ. The total area of the pulse is therefore approximately vanishing, while the total supplied energy is given by Eq.[28]. During the laser pulse duration the energy can flow in both directions, (i.e. back and forth between subsystem 1 and subsystem 2), thus exhibiting an oscillatory behaviour (see Figs.[5,6] of Ref.[21]: Phys. Rev. Lett. 120, 220601 (2018)) but with the overall effect to cool down subsystem 1.

[Page 9] “However, a longer τ also allows energy to flow back in subsystem 1 before a quasi-stationary state is established, thus the non-monotonous behaviour.”

[Q3] Is the critical time somehow related to the critical properties of the underlying phase transition of the Ising model?

[A3] We would like to thank the referee for her/his interesting comment. In order to address this point, in the revised version of the manuscript we added Fig.[7] where we show the behaviour of the critical time as a function of the temperature while we approach the critical one. It emerges that the critical time diverges near $T_c$ with a mean-field-like critical behaviour.

[Page 10] “In Fig.~\ref{fig:critical} we show the behaviour of $t_{c,m}$ as a function of the bath temperature $T$, at fixed $r=640$, $\tau=750$ and $E_0=0.2$. We observe that the critical time diverges as the temperature approaches the critical value $T_c$, see Eq.~\eqn{critT}, with a mean-field-like critical behaviour. Indeed, the numerical data are well approximated by the fitting function $f\left(T\right)\approx 970 \left(\frac{T-T_c}{T_c}\right)^{-1}$.”

Answers to: Anonymous Report 2 on 2021-7-2 (Contributed Report)

We thank the Referee for her/his observations.

[Q1] I wonder why the authors are introducing the hard core bosons in Eq. (15). They do not seem to be used later on, and the discussion concerning the structure of the spectrum [Eqs. (14)] could also be performed without them. Is there any profound reason for the introduction of hard core bosons?

[A1] The hard core bosons are introduced to make, at least in our opinion, more transparent the definition of the four eigenstates in Eq.[16] and the role of the pulse perturbation. For that reason, in the revised version we have written the pulse perturbation Eq.[18] explicitly in terms of the hard core bosons, which also answers the next request (see [R2]-[A2]).

[Q2] I do not quite understand why Eq. (18) is mimicking a laser pulse. In my opinion a laser acts at the level of a single particle (due to the dipolar selection rule). Therefore the corresponding operator should be a sum of single body operators. Where does the \sigma_x \sigma_x - term come from? This rather resembles a (dipolar) interaction.

[A2] In our model spins and, equivalently, hard core bosons are just a tool to represent a Hilbert space comprising four energy states on each site, two, 0 and 1, with lower energy and two, 2 and 3, with higher one. The 'laser pulse' allows transitions between the two sectors, specifically, 0 ↔︎ 3 and 1 ↔︎ 2, which are simply interpreted in terms of hard-core bosons. The key to our mechanism is to tune the laser frequency in resonance with 1 ↔︎ 2, thus depleting the occupation of boson b1 and increasing that of b2. The optical analogy can be make more evident imagining that b1 is even under parity and b2 odd, so that all transition processes 0 ↔︎ 3 and 1 ↔︎ 2 are dipole active.

[Pag 6] Modified Eq.[18] to express it in terms of the hard core bosons and added “The perturbation (18) allows for the transition processes $b^\dagger_{2,i}\,b^\dagga_{1,i} = \ket{2;i}\bra{1;i}$ and $b^\dagger_{2,i}\,b^\dagger_{1,i} = \ket{3;i}\bra{0;i}$ plus their hermitean conjugates (as depicted in panel a) of Fig.~\ref{fig:levels}). The optical analogy becomes evident if we assume $b^\dagga_{1,i}$ even under parity and $b^\dagga_{2,i}$ odd, so that all the above transition processes couple opposite parity states.”

[Q3] The notation of Eq. (23) is confusing when compared with Eq. (8). In one expression the argument is time while in the other one it is temperature.

[A3] In Eq.[8] the order parameter and the density matrix are the ones at equilibrium at temperature T, in Eq.[23] the system is out-of-equilibrium and the density matrix becomes time-dependent and reach the equilibrium one at $t \rightarrow \infty$. In order to distinguish the equilibrium and out-of-equilibrium cases we added the suffix $(eq)$ in the formulas of Sec.(2.1).

[Q4] I find the motivation of the dissipative terms not very convincing. Is it justified to assume that the rates are explicitly time-dependent, i.e. isn't there some implicit separation of time scales that is assumed to hold?

[A4] We mention that all the results do not change appreciably if we use the rate corresponding to the equilibrium state and represent the instantaneous eigenstates in terms of the equilibrium ones. However, we decided to use time dependent rates to be consistent with the mean field approximation and the detailed balance condition required to reach equilibrium (see Ref.[25] for a comparison between self-consistent and fixed baths in a simple case, and Ref.[24] for a general discussion).

[Page 7] “Instead, we here consider the most general Lindblad equation compatible with the mean-field character of the Hamiltonian (1), and able to drive the system towards thermal equilibrium \cite[24,25]. […] (this choice is called "self-consistent bath" and ensures that the system evolves towards its thermal equilibrium \cite{24,25}).”

Where: [24]: N. Lang and H. P. Büchler, Rev. A92, 012128 (2015), Exploring quantum phases by driven dissipation; [25]: D. S. Kosov, T. Prosen and B. Zunkovic, Journal of Physics A: Mathematical and Theoretical Phys. 44(46), 462001 (2011), Lindblad master equation approach to superconductivity in open quantum systems.

[Q5] In the conclusions you write "On the contrary, dissipation enhances the cooling effect of the perturbation, stabilising a non-thermal quasi-steady state that lasts for long after the pulse end." Are the authors sure that the dissipation is not just constructed in a way that this is the case. There are a number of assumptions, e.g. concerning the ratio of the rates, which are to some extend arbitrary. Notes, that the relative energy difference is only one of the quantities that is entering the transition rates. There is also a kinetic part which determines whether a transition can take place (states with large energy difference may be connected by complicated transition paths). Especially for correlated systems this seems to be a relevant aspect. In this sense I find the connection to photo-induced superconductivity in K3C60 also a bit far-fetched.

[A5] The cooling mechanism does not require fine tuning and persists for a wide range of parameters. We just assume that high-energy excitations dissipate faster than low-energy ones, which is a rather generic circumstance. Another issue is the one related to the strength of the transition processes. In our toy model there is just a single one that connects the low energy sector, states 0 and 1, with the high energy one, states 2 and 3. Evidently, the cooling is less efficient the smaller the coupling strength. However, regarding K3C60, we recall the Referee that in the experiment the laser hits a rather pronounced mid-infrared peak, which we have associated to an exciton that plays the role of the high-energy sector, while the role of the low energy sector is there played by particle-hole excitations. The intensity of that peak reflects the substantial strength of the process. It is self-evident that it would be totally useless to pump at an excitation with very small absorption strength. Indeed, the strength of the optical process is a prerequisite of our cooling strategy, as explicitly mentioned in the introduction when we write “… essentially based on the existence of a high energy localised mode that, when the laser is on, is able to fast soak up entropy…”.

[Page 13] “It is worth stressing that, while we make some not unphysical assumptions on the dissipative processes, we also show that the selective cooling persists for a wide range of parameters. In reality, the most critical parameter here is the strength of the coupling to the `laser pulse', i.e., the dipole matrix element in real materials, or, equivalently, the intensity of optical absorption.”

Answers to: Anonymous Report 3 on 2021-7-5 (Invited Report)

We thank the Referee for her/his kind appreciation of our work.

[Q1] I am not sure how realistic the considered model of two coupled Ising Hamiltonians is; maybe the authors can comment on that in a revised manuscript.

[A1] While the toy model we propose is extremely simple, it contains the basic ingredients to describe the generic selective cooling mechanism that takes place in more realistic systems like, we believe, alkali doped fullerides.

[Page 13] “Evidently, our toy model is an extreme oversimplification of any real material. However, the key ingredients that make the cooling strategy successful may characterise many real systems, especially strongly correlated ones where localised atomic-like high-energy excitations coexist with low-energy coherent particle-hole excitations, like, e.g., in K$_3$C$_{60}$.”

[Q2] I feel that the discussion in the manuscript is a bit brief. […]

[A2] We thank the referee for her/his comment, In the updated version of the manuscript we extended the discussion in Sec.3.1, Sec.3.2 and Sec.4 and modified Fig.[8] and Fig.[11] to make a direct comparison with the recent experimental results on K3C60 of Ref.[14]. We also added Fig.[7] to discuss the behaviour of the order parameter with the temperature. Moreover, we tried to make the presentation less colloquial.

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[Sec.2.1] we added the suffix $(eq)$ to the density matrix and the order parameter to distinguish them from the time dependent ones.

[Pag 6] Modified Eq.[18] to express it in terms of the hard core bosons and added “The perturbation (18) allows for the transition processes $b^\dagger_{2,i}\,b^\dagga_{1,i}
= \ket{2;i}\bra{1;i}$ and $b^\dagger_{2,i}\,b^\dagger_{1,i} = \ket{3;i}\bra{0;i}$ plus their hermitean conjugates (as depicted in panel a) of Fig.~\ref{fig:levels}). The optical analogy becomes evident if we assume $b^\dagga_{1,i}$ even under parity and $b^\dagga_{2,i}$ odd, so that all the above transition processes couple opposite parity states.”

[Page 7] “Instead, we here consider the most general Lindblad equation compatible with the mean-field character of the Hamiltonian (1), and able to drive the system towards thermal equilibrium \cite[24,25]. […] (this choice is called "self-consistent bath" and ensures that the system evolves towards its thermal equilibrium \cite{24,25}).”

[Page 9] “However, a longer τ also allows energy to flow back in subsystem 1 before a quasi-stationary state is established, thus the non-monotonous behaviour.”

[Page 10] “In Fig.~\ref{fig:critical} we show the behaviour of $t_{c,m}$ as a function of the bath temperature $T$, at fixed $r=640$, $\tau=750$ and $E_0=0.2$. We observe that the critical time diverges as the temperature approaches the critical value $T_c$, see Eq.~\eqn{critT}, with a mean-field-like critical behaviour. Indeed, the numerical data are well approximated by the fitting function $f\left(T\right)\approx 970 \left(\frac{T-T_c}{T_c}\right)^{-1}$.”

[Page 11] “Finally, in panel b) of Fig.~\ref{fig:varE0} we plot the value of the order parameter of subsystem 1, $m_{x,1}$, as a function of $E_0$, at fixed $r=640$ and $\tau=1200$ and after a time $t=2000$ measured from the peak of the pulse. The order parameter exhibits a monotonous increase with $E_0$, that is with the energy irradiated by the laser pulse, in agreement with the recent experiments in K$_3$C$_{60}$~\cite{Cavalleri-K3C60-2020}. Indeed, panel b) of Fig.~\ref{fig:varE0} should be qualitatively compared with panel b) of Fig.5 of Ref.~\cite{Cavalleri-K3C60-2020} where it emerge that a stronger laser pulse, at fixed pulse length and pump-pulse duration, drives the system deeper in the metastable phase.”

[Page 12] “Essentially, for large $\tau$, the transient non-thermal symmetry-broken phase becomes
a quasi-steady state kept alive by the dissipative bath. In order to compare the qualitative behaviour of the time evolution at constant pulse 'fluence' of our toy model with the experimental results of Ref.~\cite{Cavalleri-K3C60-2020}, in panel b) of Fig.~\ref{fig:tc-tmax_samearea} we plot the order parameter of subsystem 1, $m_{x,1}$, measured right after the end of the laser pulse, as a function of $\tau$. We observe a quite flat dependence of the order parameter by the laser pulse length if the laser pulse 'fluence' is kept constant. Again, the result shows an interesting qualitative agreement with the experimental observation reported in panel a) of Fig.5 of Ref.~\cite{Cavalleri-K3C60-2020} where, indeed, 'the photoresistivity was mostly independent of the pump-pulse duration and depended only on the total energy of the excitation pulse'.”

[Page 13] “It is worth stressing that, while we make some not unphysical assumptions on the dissipative processes, we also show that the selective cooling persists for a wide range of parameters. In reality, the most critical parameter here is the strength of the coupling to the `laser pulse', i.e., the dipole matrix element in real materials, or, equivalently, the intensity of optical absorption.”

[Page 13] “Evidently, our toy model is an extreme oversimplification of any real material. However, the key ingredients that make the cooling strategy successful may characterise many real systems, especially strongly correlated ones where localised atomic-like high-energy excitations coexist with low-energy coherent particle-hole excitations, like, e.g., in K$_3$C$_{60}$.”

[Page 14] “We finally mention recent works [35-37] that show how properly designed dissipative protocols can efficiently prepare a quantum system in its ground state. Therefore, tailoring dissipation may represent a novel tool to control open many-body systems, including
the selective cooling that we have here discussed.”

We added one panel to Figs.[3,8,11], and modified the captions, in agreement with the changes in the text listed above. We added Fig.[7].

We added references:
[24]: N. Lang and H. P. Büchler, Rev. A92, 012128 (2015), Exploring quantum phases by driven dissipation;
[25]: D. S. Kosov, T. Prosen and B. Zunkovic, Journal of Physics A: Mathematical and Theoretical Phys. 44(46), 462001 (2011), Lindblad master equation approach to superconductivity in open quantum systems;
[35]: C. Cormick, A. Bermudez, S. F. Huelga and M. B. Plenio, New Journal of Physics 15(7), 073027 (2013), Dissipative ground state preparation of a spin chain by a structured environment;
[36]: M. Raghunandan, F. Wolf, C. Ospelkaus, P. O. Schmidt and H. Weimer, Science Advances 6(10) (2010), Initialization of quantum simulators by sympathetic cooling;
[37]: M. Metcalf, J. E. Moussa, W. A. de Jong and M. Sarovar, Phys. Rev. Research2,023214 (2020), Engineered thermalization and cooling of quantum many-body systems.

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Report #3 by Anonymous (Referee 6) on 2021-10-13 (Invited Report)

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I think the resubmission satisfactorily addresses all previous concerns and the manuscript could be published in SciPost Physics. The expression of the interaction with the laser field in terms of two distinct spins actually makes sense because of the vastly different energy scales being involved. Making this point more explicit in the manuscript might be a good idea, but it is not strictly necessary for the understanding of the paper. I also think that the authors comment on Fig. 4 in the main text in an adequate way, especially concerning the influence of $r$ on relaxation time.

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Report #2 by Anonymous (Referee 5) on 2021-10-12 (Contributed Report)

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[Q1] I wonder why the authors are introducing the hard core bosons
in Eq. (15). They do not seem to be used later on, and the
discussion concerning the structure of the spectrum [Eqs. (14)]
could also be performed without them. Is there any profound reason
for the introduction of hard core bosons?

[A1] The hard core bosons are introduced to make, at least in our
opinion, more transparent the definition of the four eigenstates in
Eq.[16] and the role of the pulse perturbation. For that reason, in
the revised version we have written the pulse perturbation Eq.[18]
explicitly in terms of the hard core bosons, which also answers the
next request (see [R2]-[A2]).

[Response1] I still don't think that introducing the notion "hard
core bosons" is very helpful, but I leave the choice with the
authors. I would just ask the authors to please write a few more
details or at least mention that this is merely a formal
construction. Just introducing the bosons by writing "In other
words, we can write..." is not helpful. Also, please use the bosons
consistently; e.g. below Eq. (19) you resort to projectors/ket-bra
symbols, that could all be represented by bosonic operators for
consistency. The same for the jump operators; those could also be
expressed in terms of hard core bosons, right?

[Q2] I do not quite understand why Eq. (18) is mimicking a laser
pulse. In my opinion a laser acts at the level of a single particle
(due to the dipolar selection rule). Therefore the corresponding
operator should be a sum of single body operators. Where does the
\sigma_x \sigma_x - term come from? This rather resembles a
(dipolar) interaction.

[A2] In our model spins and, equivalently, hard core bosons are
just a tool to represent a Hilbert space comprising four energy
states on each site, two, 0 and 1, with lower energy and two, 2 and
3, with higher one. The laserps–e allows transitions between the
two sectors, specifically, 0 ↔︎ 3 and 1 ↔︎ 2, which are simply
interpreted in terms of hard-core bosons. The key to our mechanism
is to tune the laser frequency in resonance with 1 ↔︎ 2, thus
depleting the occupation of boson b1 and increasing that of b2. The
optical analogy can be make more evident imagining that b1 is even
under parity and b2 odd, so that all transition processes 0 ↔︎ 3 and
1 ↔︎ 2 are dipole active.

[Pag 6] Modified Eq.[18] to express it in terms of the hard core
bosons and added “The perturbation (18) allows for the transition
processes b†2,ib\dagga1,i=\ket2;i\bra1;i and
b†2,ib†1,i=\ket3;i\bra0;i plus their hermitean conjugates (as
depicted in panel a) of Fig.~???). The optical analogy becomes
evident if we assume b\dagga1,i even under parity and b\dagga2,i
odd, so that all the above transition processes couple opposite
parity states.”

[Response2] Thanks for the clarification. Please rework the
sentence that you added to the manuscript. It is not clear what you
mean by "optical analogy" (the reader does not know about our
exchange here). This is just another example (together with the
hard core bosons), which shows that the manuscript is too cryptic
and implicit in many place. Please spell out, what you want to say.

[Q3] The notation of Eq. (23) is confusing when compared with Eq.
(8). In one expression the argument is time while in the other one
it is temperature.

[A3] In Eq.[8] the order parameter and the density matrix are the
ones at equilibrium at temperature T, in Eq.[23] the system is
out-of-equilibrium and the density matrix becomes time-dependent
and reach the equilibrium one at t→∞. In order to distinguish the
equilibrium and out-of-equilibrium cases we added the suffix (eq)
in the formulas of Sec.(2.1).

[Response3] Thanks.

[Q4] I find the motivation of the dissipative terms not very
convincing. Is it justified to assume that the rates are explicitly
time-dependent, i.e. isn't there some implicit separation of time
scales that is assumed to hold?

[A4] We mention that all the results do not change appreciably if
we use the rate corresponding to the equilibrium state and
represent the instantaneous eigenstates in terms of the equilibrium
ones. However, we decided to use time dependent rates to be
consistent with the mean field approximation and the detailed
balance condition required to reach equilibrium (see Ref.[25] for a
comparison between self-consistent and fixed baths in a simple
case, and Ref.[24] for a general discussion).

[Page 7] “Instead, we here consider the most general Lindblad
equation compatible with the mean-field character of the
Hamiltonian (1), and able to drive the system towards thermal
equilibrium \cite[24,25]. […] (this choice is called
"self-consistent bath" and ensures that the system evolves towards
its thermal equilibrium \cite{24,25}).”

Where: [24]: N. Lang and H. P. Büchler, Rev. A92, 012128 (2015),
Exploring quantum phases by driven dissipation; [25]: D. S. Kosov,
T. Prosen and B. Zunkovic, Journal of Physics A: Mathematical and
Theoretical Phys. 44(46), 462001 (2011), Lindblad master equation
approach to superconductivity in open quantum systems.

[Response4] Can you please spell out what "compatibility with the
mean-field character" precisely means?

[Q5] In the conclusions you write "On the contrary, dissipation
enhances the cooling effect of the perturbation, stabilising a
non-thermal quasi-steady state that lasts for long after the pulse
end." Are the authors sure that the dissipation is not just
constructed in a way that this is the case. There are a number of
assumptions, e.g. concerning the ratio of the rates, which are to
some extend arbitrary. Notes, that the relative energy difference
is only one of the quantities that is entering the transition
rates. There is also a kinetic part which determines whether a
transition can take place (states with large energy difference may
be connected by complicated transition paths). Especially for
correlated systems this seems to be a relevant aspect. In this
sense I find the connection to photo-induced superconductivity in
K3C60 also a bit far-fetched.

[A5] The cooling mechanism does not require fine tuning and
persists for a wide range of parameters. We just assume that
high-energy excitations dissipate faster than low-energy ones,
which is a rather generic circumstance. Another issue is the one
related to the strength of the transition processes. In our toy
model there is just a single one that connects the low energy
sector, states 0 and 1, with the high energy one, states 2 and 3.
Evidently, the cooling is less efficient the smaller the coupling
strength. However, regarding K3C60, we recall the Referee that in
the experiment the laser hits a rather pronounced mid-infrared
peak, which we have associated to an exciton that plays the role of
the high-energy sector, while the role of the low energy sector is
there played by particle-hole excitations. The intensity of that
peak reflects the substantial strength of the process. It is
self-evident that it would be totally useless to pump at an
excitation with very small absorption strength. Indeed, the
strength of the optical process is a prerequisite of our cooling
strategy, as explicitly mentioned in the introduction when we write
“… essentially based on the existence of a high energy localised
mode that, when the laser is on, is able to fast soak up entropy…”.

[Page 13] “It is worth stressing that, while we make some not
unphysical assumptions on the dissipative processes, we also show
that the selective cooling persists for a wide range of parameters.
In reality, the most critical parameter here is the strength of the
coupling to the `laser pulse', i.e., the dipole matrix element in
real materials, or, equivalently, the intensity of optical
absorption.”

[Response5] Thank you, I accept that. But could you please explain
in what sense the strength of the coupling to the laser pulse is
the "most critical parameter"? Also, rather than writing "we make
some not unphysical assumptions", you could just spell out once
more what assumptions you are making. And after that you can
re-iterate why they are reasonable/physical.

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Report #1 by Anonymous (Referee 4) on 2021-9-27 (Invited Report)

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I feel that the authors have not taken into account all the comments in the referee reports.
For example the question of referee two why the laser-interaction appears as an interaction between two spins is explained in the response of the referees but not in the manuscript.
I agree with the referee that this aspect is not clear in the manuscript, and I do feel that it should be clarified there.

I also feel that the discussion of the explicit results has hardly improved. Fig. 4 for example shows several complicated functions, but there is no explanation of what features in the functions are relevant. The authors essentially assume that the reader will understand the results on their own.
Later-on, the authors show Fig. 10 with the only comments that it is similar data to what is shown in Fig. 4.
I don't think that many readers will be able to appreciate the results.

While I still think that the actual results might warrant publication, I feel that the explanations are substantially too scarce to make the manuscript reasonably accessible.
I thus maintain my assessment that publication can be recommended only after a substantial revision.

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