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Spin-dependent Off-Axis Holography in Magnetic Environments
by Nejc Blaznik, Dries van Oosten, Peter van der Straten
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| Authors (as registered SciPost users): | Peter van der Straten |
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| Preprint Link: | https://arxiv.org/abs/2507.17474v1 (pdf) |
| Date submitted: | July 24, 2025, 10:01 a.m. |
| Submitted by: | Peter van der Straten |
| Submitted to: | SciPost Physics Core |
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| Academic field: | Physics |
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| Approach: | Experimental |
Abstract
Nondestructive spin-resolved imaging of ultracold atomic gases requires calculating the differences of the refractive indices seen by two circular probe polarizations. Perfect overlap of the two images, corresponding to two different polarizations, is required well below the feature size of interest. In this paper, we demonstrate that the birefringence of atoms in magnetic field gradients results in polarization-dependent aberrations in the image, which deteriorates the overlap. To that end, we develop a model that couples atomic tensor polarizability with position-dependent spin orientation and yields aberration predictions for accumulated phase shifts in arbitrary field geometries. Applied to data from an ultra-cold atomic cloud trapped in a Ioffe-Pritchard trap, the model quantitatively reproduces the observed distortion across a range of temperatures. A residual offset of $\sim1\;\mu\mathrm{m}$ remains even under uniform field conditions, likely due to optical asymmetries. For images obtained through off-axis holography, the full complex field of the probe enables post-processing removal of all magnetically induced aberrations through a single numerically calculated Fourier-space phase mask.
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Report #2 by Anonymous (Referee 2) on 2025-9-5 (Invited Report)
- Cite as: Anonymous, Report on arXiv:2507.17474v1, delivered 2025-09-05, doi: 10.21468/SciPost.Report.11877
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A thorough theoretical modelling revealing sophisticated experimental signatures.
Weaknesses
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The authors work in the framework of the harmonic approximation of the Ioffe-Pritchard trapping potential. Whether this is valid or not at their initial temperatures, in particualr for the outer regions of the trapped atom cloud, cannot be assessed from the paper. It would be desireable to have a comment to about this.
I failed to find the information about the optical density (OD) at which these experiments have been performed. Does this affect the interpretation of the data, in particular, since this will vary when changing the temperature. What is the contribution of OD gradients to the images?
How sensitive are the data and interpretation to the detuning of the probe light, which seems to be chosen at a fixed value for the manuscript. How was this value selected?
Requested changes
see above.
Recommendation
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Report #1 by Anonymous (Referee 1) on 2025-8-25 (Invited Report)
- Cite as: Anonymous, Report on arXiv:2507.17474v1, delivered 2025-08-25, doi: 10.21468/SciPost.Report.11794
Report
The main aim of the present paper is to analyse the effect of a magnetic environment (a trap) on the dispersion of light with $\sigma^+$ or $\sigma^-$ polarization by an ultracold cloud. The authors find that dispersion under such conditions indeed leads to a significant offset of the resultig images, confirming largely the experimental observation.
The paper is well written and can be followed relatively easily. However, I had to make considerable detours to Refs 18 and 19 to understand the SOAH imaging technique. Maybe a bit more information could be given here, such that the manuscript is somewhat more self-contained.
I was also a bit surprised to see the same data presented twice in Figs 1 and 5. Maybe the first figure could be reduced just to show the main effect and thus avoid revisiting all the data.
Finally, I am puzzled by the title. In my understanding, the analysis is very general and shows the different displacements/distortions of $\sigma^+$ and $\sigma^-$ light by ultracold atoms. This happens in many experiments, but is typically not noticed, since only one of these polarization orientations is used. Here, the SOAH technique is used to observe this effect, but that is not the main result. I would therefore suggest to use a tite which directly reflects the main result.
Requested changes
- Please add some more information on SOAH, such that the manuscript is somewhat more self-contained.
- I suggest to reduce the first figure to show the main effect and thus avoid revisiting all the data.
- I suggest changing the title to reflect the main result.
Recommendation
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We thank the referee for carefully reading the manuscript, his appraisal and providing us with his suggestions. We agree with his comments and have adjusted the manuscript accordingly (see enclosed manuscript with the changes shown in red and the added sections shown in blue). Our response to the comments is as follows: Please add some more information on SOAH, such that the manuscript is somewhat more self-contained. We have been very short on the description of the technique, since we are using the same setup as in a previous paper. However, we understand that adding more information makes the article more self-contained. We have added a full paragraph describing the technique at the start of Sec. II. I suggest to reduce the first figure to show the main effect and thus avoid revisiting all the data. We have reduced Fig. 5 considerably, in order not to revisit the data. In Fig. 1 the temperature is important, since it provides a clue to the cause of the effect. But, it is not necessary to repeat the information in Fig. 5. I suggest changing the title to reflect the main result. We thank the referee for this suggestion. Indeed, the current title does not reflect the main result. Thus we propose to change the title to "Polarization-sensitive imaging in magnetic environments". On behalf of the authors, Peter van der StratenRebuttal to the first referee report
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Author: Peter van der Straten on 2025-09-10 [id 5802]
(in reply to Report 2 on 2025-09-05)Rebuttal to the second referee report
We thank the referee for carefully reading the manuscript, his appraisal and providing us with his suggestions. Here we provide our reaction to the points raised by the referee. For the changes, please see the enclosed manuscript with the changes shown in red and the added sections in blue.
The paper is very technical.
We have added new introductionary material to both Sec. II and III.A, as suggested by the referee. Here we describe in a more descriptive way the contents of the two sections to a wider audience.
The authors work in the framework of the harmonic approximation of the Ioffe-Pritchard trapping potential.
We have added a paragraph to Sec. III.B describing that our trap is in the harmonic regime for the temperatures that we use.
I failed to find the information about the optical density (OD) at which these experiments have been performed.
We have added a paragraph to Sec. II starting with "In our implementation .." that discusses the choices that we have made regarding the detuning of the light, the effect of the OD, and the phase shifts.
On behalf of the authors, Peter van der Straten
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